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UNDER THE SHOWER

by sally-a-bayan

| / / | \ | \ \ | \ / // / | \ | \ | / | /  / / \ \ \ | / / \ Storm is gone and all hypes  have settled down i go straight to that one place for that much awaited cleansing...............and freedom i strip myself of clothings on the surface and those underneath my skin... Under the shower i am bare as a newborn babe.   sighing....as i surrender myself to the trickles of water sliding                                             down                                                    my                                                          body... I turn around once...                               twice...                                     thrice,                                             to spray the wetness                                                      all over me... ...i turn the knob gently....for more water ...close my eyes   ...as countless thin drops flow out, touch my head,                                                                 i let them trace                                                                         the countours                                                                                  of my face... Mouth opens a bit i drink in some...to quench my thirst let go of some...and retain the rest be overcome by the coolness of the tap water, .....take time to reflect...to ponder... ....while wet eyes give way to sniffles ....blending with those refreshing trickles, ...........erasing muddy stains of fear ...................and dried marks of tears ................sighs, of fatigue...and regret .............these, i most often neglect... .....under the shower, they'd be quashed ..........i'd let them all be awash ......................save for my personal friends, ..........like grit........and good ole common sense. As water saturates my whole being ...a few expectations and dreams ..........go down the drain .......while others.....stay ........and dwell within. Some feelings just cannot hide ...some, refuse to surface, and stay buried deep inside. Sally Copyright October 2015 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan
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sally-a-bayan
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Written by
sally-a-bayan
F / Filipino
Published
Feb 22, 2016
Time
3m
Notes

^^^written after the heavy rains in October of 2015^^^

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#freedom#grit#cleansing#commonsense#trickles#undertheshower
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