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Nov 2015
I can't help but to retaliate
But I'm not losing hope
My love will not eradicate
Me, he can't provoke

He won't love you the way I do
But will try to correct my faults
you know that I'll be more true
Our love has better results

I can love you better now
Better than he will treat you
Changed so much it would raise your brow
Never will I mistreat you

I matured over our breakup
Thriving through all this pain
Your value in my tears
Love is still sustained

If you come back I'd be grateful
This is only the beginning
Trust me to be faithful
Both of us will be winning

Don't give up just yet
We're almost at the line
My heart is ready, go and set
Spark back our love like a six second vine
This poem really captures the feelings I express towards my recent relationship. I chose "No longer envious" as the title to convey that there is no more room for jealousy because love will always be stronger if you are self-assured. I coincidently wrote a letter in the form of a poem to evaluate my love for my ex-girlfriend, in hope that she will notice that I've changed my ways. I also recently found out someone else is interested in her but I've taken nothing to heart, that's why I wrote "Our love has better results". This quote to me is really powerful in achieving my wanted outcome, though I know others are interested in her, our memories cannot be easily forgotten keeping in mind that the relationship a fruitful 3 long years.

To the audience reading this poem, I encourage that if you are going through a breakup, embrace the struggle. Do not listen to what others think about your decision. If you decide you want to get back with your ex after losing them then at the end of the day it is what makes you happy and what will make you go to sleep at night.

I quote "Spark back our love like a six second vine", to portray that not only did I find her extremely ravishing but it's also an analogy but also a metaphor that the six seconds when I first met her I knew that there was something special. It is almost like when you come across a really funny video you want to replay it over and over again and it will never ever lose it's charm.

Finally, if this poem were to ever get to you just know that I'm still trying. I acknowledge that I've hurt you and I've lied to you so many times, but the only way to show you I changed my ways is for me to show you things can be better now. I no longer want to associate our breakup as a depressing moment since it's encouraged me to bring back my desire to write poems again, to start expressing myself more in words and magnify it in actions.
Matt
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