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Stark Naked

by @samanthah7

I was clutching on tattered vines Praying fervently to all that are divine To let it hold Please make it hold I was gripping tightly on my last strand of faith (I'm slipping) Just let me hold Let my life hold Then you pulled at me And I went crashing             d                   o                        w                               n So here I am with a shattered heart, a broken soul and a tattered gown.
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May 27, 2015
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This is about how you're barely holding on without going mad and then yearning for some guy's love turns out to be your breaking point. It's titled Stark Naked because I wanted to write something about vulnerability and here it is.

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