I saw a blue heron stepping with intent precision through my fogged up sleep. movement odd, off (it's always wrong, it's always off) with too long legs, proportions run askew. maybe that's the exchange the kind of grace where you can feel the push (pulling back to punch brick walls, but not too hard.) (you wouldn't want to hurt someone.) composed of tensed sinews, taut muscles. that predatory focus held, released. the frog might (urge for a little blood pulled past the surface, a bit of scraped knuckle) have felt it coming but late by just enough. Sometimes they get away (it's not a trap you can gnaw out of) frogs are also good at this predators in their own right. (try anyway, spend energy you haven't got) maybe it's about control too fast and the frog will sense it so going slow (you wouldn't want to go too far) is probably for the best. weighing the calorie expenditure there isn't a lot to waste (actually, you always want to do that) another meal struck off the list and a little kid watches- stricken. fascinated. wants, like a hunger, to see it again. (again and again and again)
i've just messed with this again so if you've read it before it's different now. this is like the 4th or 5th version.