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 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
nivek
its a deep river comes to the surface
bubbles up from the heart
an unseen principle in all that you do
each chosen word an ocean.
 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
JP
Dream
 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
JP
a knock on my window
deep sleep
got up
opened, to see
a floating guest
Wow!!
your message  
entered
to hug me
tight
very tight....
a joy of death
a prayer
enough
enough...
please turn me into stone
......  to enter your garden
I fell in love with you in metaphors. Having never seen you, but reading every word you write.

The way you dangle your participles, naked and raw, yet still soft and round, then casually leave unfinished sentences as if to say, please, finish me as you will

You tempt with your soft parentheses, tightly wrapped around my waist, the words they squeeze rubbing up against the curves

Your similes, a sideways smile, like the cat, canary gone, pull me closer until your delicate punctuation is so warm, so wet, I can feel it pressed against me, you alliterate, such sweet surrender, so sublime, and I succumb

I want you now in rhyme, in verse, in prose, in  sweet haiku

     'where in so few words
you trace the shape of my heart
         and then (somehow) paint its hue'


I fell in love with all your metaphors, the way your sentence structure feels pressed hard against my body, devilishly running on so that I'll follow ,your undulating syllables, your firm round letters, your tight sweet semi-colon, that no common comma could replace.
To all of the amazing poets here that win my heart with words
 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
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Life is a short ride.
Don't spend too much time posing
For its camera.
 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
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Taste, sight, scent, sound, touch
Each one holds a map to you
If they fail, I won't
 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
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Women and colors
Best men distinguishing red
Save for flags when raised
 May 2017 Mahdi Akhloumadi
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Why impregnating
Wombs are still valued more than
Impregnating minds
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