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My tone is necessitated by the sinner who does not listen otherwise. Instead of wasting time with your childish antics you could've been helping them instead of being hostile to me. There will be no excuses for such cowardly laziness at the last day.
Real love vs fake love hate
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Small and stupid
Is popular?
"But whether it's good or bad, criticism is necessary."

Grow up
They note leaves /

But not people /

They seep tea /

But don't sɛw
Response to https://hellopoetry.com/poem/1522292/winter-is-coming/

You see the sun but do not mention the son. How then do ye proclaim to be one?
Simple souls
It is a pain to greet them
For them a treat to treat them
For me a miss, amiss, mistreatin'
Their mere breath a threat
Or more a discomfort
Like a fly or gnat
I don't like my net,
To fret
But I need it
Not wet
And with no holes
Druga is illusion
A symbol or a membrane
A discus to be thrown
To observe the arc in sunshine.

She is not the ball
To be shotput through
She is not the goal
But a passage by the soul.

Sit, spread
Your arms wide as rainbow.
Wife, you have forgotten
The son is not your daughter.
What do thou focus on?

See also https://hellopoetry.com/poem/3353827/devi-2019/
You say "Livin' the dream!"
Sarcastically
When I ask how you're doing.

But if you listened to me
You could live it.

You don't, though,
So you must not think it's possible.

Be more optimistic, eh?
And start listening.

It's called mutual support.
We would both benefit.

As it stands
You're letting us both down
By letting down me.
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