SilentWhisper - Hello Poetry

SilentWhisper

24/F/Earth I've been kind of just writing my own type of poetry since I was about 12. I don't know if it makes any sense when read but I'm hoping to take some poetry classes in college to improve. If I make mistakes I welcome constructive criticism.

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