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Elizabeth Squires
Poems
Dec 2016
Bit Too Thick (Pantoum)
no let up from the scorching bat
the flogging is a bit too thick
where the fielder gets laid out flat
due to its fervent canning stick*
the flogging is a bit too thick
we've been struck by the boiling heat
due to its fervent canning stick
every day this is on the beat
we've been struck by the boiling heat
downed in a sixer's knocking hit
every day this is on the beat
which drains our energetic pit
downed in a sixer's knocking hit
due to its fervent canning stick
which drains our energetic pit
*the flogging is a bit too thick
#summer
#hit
#heat
#boiling
#flogging
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