sometimes it's worth hiding "punctuation" marks in brackets, notably enclosed exclamation marks, or question marks, where a comma ought make an indentation, otherwise.
when people write with a ©
in mind
rather than a heart,
well... was anything really written,
if anything at all (?)
other than minding anything
other than a gnat bite?
the annoyance of a *teeeeen
princ'esss?
just asking, seems
a poem with © dicta to be both
plagued by a fatigue to read,
or to cherish, and most probably
written by a daughter of some
high-flying lawyer...
pretty boring stuff...
with art less managed,
than the shortcomings of the "art"
extended, into a quest
for the security of making "laws"...
just like:
those poems that become
akin to newspapers...
today's hot-bagels, tomorrow's
maggot infused trash,
wishing the status of being toilet
paper:
not soft enough, sorry.
