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"matroyshka" poems
Right at the corner of the street An antique store lights it bulb I went it My eyes stuck at the shiny matroyshka doll The owner stood up And gave me the doll The 1st doll look so happy There is sparkle in its eyes and the smile shines as bright as the star who lights up the darkness of the night I open the 2nd doll It smiles without any sparkle on its eyes It smiles as if it has no soul I open the 3rd doll It has no expression It doesn't look happy or sad either As my head is spinning around I look and open the 4th doll With the sad look on its face I start to realize that something is off Then I open the last one And i feel like I'm watching myself A broken pieces doll Deep in my heart I feel like it is me I smile as bright as the sun like the first doll While I'm actually broken inside like the last doll
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Mar 4, 2019
Mar 4, 2019 at 1:53 AM UTC
Matroyshka Doll
A storm blew through early, left frost etched, lit, glistening, on a window's waking surface. I sit framed by that translucence, my daughter aligns, orders mirroring matroyshka doll members. I reflect on an essay*, how poems are a symbol of  will, concluding a pact, perhaps achieved in diction, image metaphor, adherence to structure, rhyme, form. Might these devolve to decoration? Or, trace the transmission of "will to commitments," expressing “intent”, "weakly lost or strongly spent?” Frost etchings fissure, shift, glint, slide on their emergent effluence, configure in gusts of cognition.   I sense a covenant in these lines. my daughter adjusts her doll's placements, the promise of one revealed in the other. Copyright © 2004 Gary Brocks —————————————— Attribution: Stanzas 3, 4, and 5 are greatly influenced by my reading the Robert Frost essay titled *THE CONSTANT SYMBOL. The short phrases in italicized quotes are direct quotes from that essay.
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Aug 28, 2018
Aug 28, 2018 at 11:18 PM UTC
INSPIRED BY FROST