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They will tell you there is a right way.
They will hand you a torch and call it the sun.
They will roll their words in raw linen and whisper:
"This is what poetry is meant to be."

And you will nod.
Because they have made it so that not nodding feels like blasphemy.

But listen—
the ink does not check your credentials.
The meter does not ask if your suffering is organic.
A line does not collapse because it was crafted instead of bled.

They will tell you a poem must be naked, barefoot, aching—
as if there is no beauty in a well-cut suit.
They will decry the temple and build a pulpit in its ruins,
preaching freedom in a voice that allows no dissent.

Good poets are cult leaders,
and the first rule of the cult
is that they are not one.

So write the sonnet, carve the sestina,
sculpt the page in iambic steel.
Or break it, shatter it, scatter its bones—
but let no one call your wreckage untrue.

And if they do,
smile.
Because poetry does not kneel to priests.
A counter-point mirrored in style to:

https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4983752/good-words-are-clickbait/

The morale of the story is:

try not to dictate creation and by extension freedoms.
 6d Christy
Breeze
Here we are
One and done
A love gone astray

Feeling used
A bit confused
As trash just thrown away

Perhaps one day
You'll realize
The value of what you had

A loving friend
A romantic end
Something not so bad

Life will go by
The tears will dry
A love pulled apart

Put up your walls
Watch us fall
You'll always have my heart

Here we are
One and done
As once again you leave

Feeling used
A bit confused
What exactly did this achieve?
She made me a scarf.
It was Ireland green
France Fleur de lis blue
German sunlight red
She worries about me like
a treasure in her heart
where I feel most at home,
that will be lost someday.
So the billionaires tell us
we may feel a little pain,

but they're doing it all for us,
it's not for their gain.

Such noble men
these saints must be,
twisting the fabric of democracy.

How lucky am I that they do it all for me.

I'll tighten my belt and **** it up,
for the sake of my country's prosperity.

Seriously, 36 trillion is all they need!
Can that be done by making 300
million bleed?

Now I'm no mathematician,
but those numbers don't add up.

And as much as I hate to say it.

Honestly, I think we're ******!!!
Blind to the subject of being blind in love –
does that mean I can see?

Do I believe in the belief; of love at first sight
isn’t faith believing in that you cannot see,
that which you hope to be?


But I could close my eyes to a better scene –
when we go out and it doesn’t go so well;
we should have made it a blind date!


            Now this love feels blind.
I’m not crying
because
you’re gone.
I’m dying
because
You still
slice me deep
inside of my
mind—
Trying to
end me
every night.
 Feb 3 Christy
Breeze
Waking up at 3 am
Looking at my phone
Searching for a Telegram
To know I’m not alone
Thinking of the time we had
Watching the sunrise
Haunted by last visions of
The tears in your eyes

Where are you now
Where can you be
Is the picture clearer now
Without me
Forever more
We’ll never see
In the abyss of memories
Is where we’ll be

Moving on was hard to do
A part of me is gone
Pictured moments of our time
Living through our songs
Wishing you a happy life
Though we are apart
Our lives forever changed
We held each other’s hearts

Where are you now
Where can you be
Is the picture clearer now
Without me
Forever more
We’ll never see
In the abyss of memories
Is where we’ll be



Tears that we cry
Go unconsoled
A treasured tale
That never will be told

Where are you now
Where can you be
Is the picture clearer now
Without me
Forever more
We’ll never see
In the abyss of memories
Is where we’ll be
True love is everlasting,
not even death can take it away.

True love will always linger,
even if another takes its place.

For in the heart and memories,
it will always hold a space.

So do not grieve forever,
a passing true love.

They carried your love
with them until the end.

So try not to guilt yourself so deeply,
When grief's grip starts to release thee.

And feelings of love begin to
find you once again.
I've seen people consumed with grief to the point
that their continued existence destroys them
And I can't help but think this is not what their love
would have wanted for them.
And that's the message I was trying to convey here.
 Jan 22 Christy
Breeze
Birthday
 Jan 22 Christy
Breeze
Another year passes by
Never to relive
Another page is turned
Never to read again
Time marches on
Never to return
The clock moves forward
The gap closes
Reminding us to savor every moment
As that window of life steadily closes
 Jan 22 Christy
Breeze
One spirit
One voice
In him rejoice

One light
One way
His love won’t stray

All you’ve got to do is surrender
Put all your plans aside
Let the masterful creator
Lead and be your guide

One dream
One hope
His strength to cope

One word
One phrase
To sing his praise

All you’ve got to do is surrender
There’s no better time than this
Made in the image of the one true God
Open up, don’t resist

One spirit
One voice
In him rejoice

One light
One way
His love won’t stray

Our ways are not the same as his
He’s not looking for perfection
Rest in the Father’s hands

One spirit
One song
In him we belong

One hope
We pray
For salvation one day
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