Your words are truly beautiful They paint the page Dance in front of my eyes Your words flow as surely and as calmly as the ocean There is a peace in the writing There is love and honesty in the writing There is a connection with the honesty of life that I feel in the words And I thank you for your beautiful poems
Below are excerpts from some of my favorite poems by ShowYouLove:
these are the things i love:
These are some things I love
Fresh baked bread and homemade apple pie A long happy day concluded with a tired sigh Friends that are forever and love that is pure and true Spending time with those I love and when I think of you Being there for those in need and ones that are suffering To take a bad day make it happy and the joy we bring
I love these lines as they blend all of the truly simple pleasures - good food, time happily spent, good friends, thinking of those you love. Very beautiful words.
Regrets (Going Home):
I might have done things differently if so I have come to understand a little a purpose far greater than me Life is more than just a job, money, or nice things I believe It is family, it is love, it is a something that you feel In your heart, in your soul, and it is very real Helping others, taking care of yourself, being there, showing love These are all things that matters most if push comes down to shove Then again itβs not too late to try to reconcile Iβll take responsibility for consequences and go the extra mile The only thing I would ask is to keep me in your prayers And that you know wherever you go someone really cares The song changes, the light turns and I continue heading home To a place I can go back to no matter how far away I might roam
This is one of my favorite poems. I love how honest and open the poem is. It recognizes faults but also shows how it's never too late to show your love to someone else and to express gratitude and ask for forgiveness. I find this poem to be amazing and inspiring.
Make It Better:
I want to be your salt, I want to be your light To chase away the dark of night and say that it'll be alright But I can't do any of this and it hurts me to the core To see you suffer and not be able to help more
I like this passage because I think it expresses a feeling everyone has had in their life where they desperately want to help someone but can't. There is something sad and beautiful about this shared emotion.
Fragile Treasure:
But under proper circumstances we can bloom and flourish too And we can bring harm or joy to others; the choice is up to you Life is short and is a precious treasure True beauty and worth are something only God can measure Treat all life with care and respect For each one is sacred and hand select
I love this poem and this passage because it shows how positive your writing is. I think it reflects the respect you have for life and that is beautiful!
Insecurities:
When the light is fading fast, remember it's only in your mind The past is gone, you can't go back and try once more Now to remember not dwell and to look forward Learn and grow Your insecurities have no real control
I really enjoyed this because it again takes an idea that all people have shared - insecurities - and puts a positive outlook on it. Again it feels very honest to me and that is why I love it.
Thank you again ShowYouLove for your poetry. Your words really do inspire me and so many of your poems really resonate and connect with me and for that i am thankful.
This was in response to the Dear Blank Challenge. A great idea!!!