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Prayers Harked

The blaze of the sun cut through their flesh Sun kissed sweaty skin and dehydrated lungs Knelled and cried for mercy The heavens answered their prayers Loud thuds were heard like a roaring lion Lightning struck like a shooting star Their quench was put off Soil's aroma spread; it rained.
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Written by
zainab-attari
Published
Jul 2, 2014
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11·50
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Although I am not a lover of rains, but I am still very grateful for the rains today! Since morning it has been pouring and it has turned my warm walls and the hot air outside cold and blissful! So this is me, giving thanks to Allah for the showers of blessings. The heat was killing everybody in Mumbai! Okay, that is about how much good I can say about the rains.

To the rain fans – have an amazing time playing football in the muck and getting wet in the rains! Stay safe, don’t catch a cold :) Do share with me your experience in the rains and your take on it.

P.S. My first try at a fifty words poetry.

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#poetry#india#lord#rains#mumbai#thanking#monsoons
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