Poetry is not about rhythm like the heartbeat of a baby Neither about display of grandiose words from an old treasure chest Poetry is not constructed by three pairs of spider's spinnerets Neither made by sticky saliva of termites
It is a choice of a hand connected to the veins of the heart It is a chance of finding a warm spot It is a change of fate
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