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Drowning, in a sense

by @ady

I've drowned before, in a literal sense of the word. I, fancying myself adept, bored of shallow waters dived in to the depths. However, proving my pride quite wrong, the water submersed me with its innate and temperate nature to a world void of breath or zephyr. I flailed my arms, and kicked my feet; but to the sapphire liquid my efforts came quiet inept. Understanding my current disposition, I left myself be enveloped. My lungs wailed and burned, the irony hardly lost, and as I sank towards the muted pit of abysmal blue I construed of Love's similar tactics. Because now that I am drowning in the loveliness of your undiluted singularity; the resonance of sound, when around you, is dulled by the  euphony of your voice, my lungs have a lack of oxygen and the tilt of the colors of the spectrum are vibrant and mesmerizing. I've drowned before, in a metacognitive sense of the word. I, more experienced, don't fancy myself a great swimmer, because in the torrents of your sea, I am but a mariner lost in the sublime beauty of exquisite waters.
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Written by
ady
28 / F / American
For You?
Written by
ady
28 / F / American
Published
Mar 31, 2014
Time
2m
Notes

Don't know if I like the title, perhaps I'll change it later?

Tags
#love#helpless#blue#drowning#sea#mariner#experienced#inexperienced
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