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Xyns
Poems
Mar 2014
Broken Down Society
Shadowed hearts
Dancing on a broken flame
Where they are going
They shall remain
Fractured souls
Ignoring the burning urge
To become whole
Into darkness, they surge
Candle light
Illuminating the shelter
Of those alone
With lives so helter-sketler
Drifting comrades
Ignored calls in the dead of night
Lost in thoughts
They've backed down from the fight
Holy water
Poured out by a pastor
Forsaken love
From thy father
Abandoned faith
Drenched in the guilt of blood
Confusion sets in
Guidelines as clear as mud
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