13h
Creaking of wooden boards,
before a car shall take its fall
into a river with such warm of lights,
and extinguished upon the coldly night,
and trapped are the souls of freezing,
Snap comes a crackle and the pop
and before you know it, a bookshop
sells how you died in a disaster,
A family of sons and daughters
This is is the rapid flow of water.
Dreams are like cobbled old stones,
The same but varies in these old bones,
I twisted the bulb but the street lamps,
won't come alive like skateboard ramps
in the local of this community
and I leave so pale my adversities
will fade in the rain as the sun comes out.
before a car shall take its fall
into a river with such warm of lights,
and extinguished upon the coldly night,
and trapped are the souls of freezing,
Snap comes a crackle and the pop
and before you know it, a bookshop
sells how you died in a disaster,
A family of sons and daughters
This is is the rapid flow of water.
Dreams are like cobbled old stones,
The same but varies in these old bones,
I twisted the bulb but the street lamps,
won't come alive like skateboard ramps
in the local of this community
and I leave so pale my adversities
will fade in the rain as the sun comes out.
A re-write of my first poem after more than a decade and a half break & very rusty.
The first version obviously does not have the last 3 years to relate to.
I re-wrote the poem to show beginners the difference 3 years make when dedicated to the art of poetry. Poetry will not make you money but it does hone your writing skills.
Please note - Damocles below is a troll on this site who targets random people for sport, he has nothing better to do with his time. Please ignore his comment below.
The first version obviously does not have the last 3 years to relate to.
I re-wrote the poem to show beginners the difference 3 years make when dedicated to the art of poetry. Poetry will not make you money but it does hone your writing skills.
Please note - Damocles below is a troll on this site who targets random people for sport, he has nothing better to do with his time. Please ignore his comment below.
