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victoria
Poems
Jan 2022
Be careful
Be careful of your words
For as they fall, they manifest
In the heart of the receiver
Who's emotionally undressed
Forever a disappointment
Eternally desperate to prove
As piece by piece they realise
If not perfect.............they lose.
Persistence hangs as stalactites
To please, to please, to please
But failure to get it perfect
The pain is never released
Be careful of your words
For as they fall, they manifest
In the heart of the receiver
Who's emotionally undressed
#people
#pleaser
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