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Undertow

Ring of white rope bound to my soul

A glimpse of a life drowning away

My heart lingering on the edge of no tomorrow

Soaring cliff above all the rushing water

 

Let me lay this rope down

Unburden this weary soul

Never shrinking from what drags underneath the water

Grasping at unseen air to breath

 

Just take me down the river,

Don’t fight the undertow

Just take me down the river

The sadness you don’t want to know

Just take me down the river

Don’t fight the undertow

Let this weary soul flow away now

 

No use fighting against the current

Sorrow and heartache is not the solution

Let go of the rope and all the pain it holds

Float on and take the hits

 

Raging rapids drives your rage

The drop off kills you bit by bit

Up to the last big drop

Into the deep, into the deep

 

Just take me down the river,

Don’t fight the undertow

Just take me down the river

The sadness you don’t want to know

Just take me down the river

Don’t fight the undertow

Let this weary soul flow away now

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Written by
steven-brett-craig
American
Published
Mar 28, 2021
Lines·Words
30·190
Tags
#sadness#heartbroken#letting#go
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