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Grecian (Patroclus' lost words: I)

body like a Hoplite,

raised from the dust to lay the land-

sent armed

ashen spear and heart,

trunks of armour clad legs

growing into the clay coloured Earth

rooted.

 

these lyre-heartstrings taut with longing.

to see

a browbeaten Myrmidon,

in daylight.

 

watch, as the breath of Zeus escapes

Grecian chests,

concave with muscle

Olympus itself exists within those crevices.

 

i lay offerings,

ambrosia soaked spoken word

at the under-flesh of your calf

laying beside myself

in hope the whispers bestowed to you from the Fates

on the eve of Troy

mean less with your lips, pressed to wine, against mine.

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Written by
OskarA
24 / M
Published
Oct 25, 2020
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22·101
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#greek#love#patroclus#achilles#longing
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