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neth jones
Poems
Aug 2020
Tanka - 'reply' homework II
"While I gaze upon it
I feel a certain distance:
The moon light
Makes its way to dwellings
Everywhere, I feel."
by Ki no Tsurayuki
My Reply
Bright Issues the Moon
dusts the landscape with pale ash
illumination
slackens our taut customs
we're brought closer to our hearts
[Bonus Material. Earlier looser version :
When brighter the Moon
unknots our taught habits
spends our ideas
freely in its pale light
we act closer to our hearts]
#tanka
#short
#homework
#reply
#moon
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neth jones
Montreal
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