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The Tender Weight of Her Sighs

The Tender Weight of Her Sighs by Michael R. Burch The tender weight of her sighs lies heavily upon my heart; apart from her, full of doubt, without her presence to revolve around, found wanting direction or course, cursed with the thought of her grief, believing true love is a myth, with hope as elusive as tears, hers and mine, unable to lie, I sigh ... NOTE: This poem has an unusual rhyme scheme, with the last word of each line rhyming with the first word of the next line. The final line is a “closing couplet” in which both words rhyme with the last word of the preceding line. I believe I invented this nonce form and will dub it the "End-First Curtal Sonnet." Keywords/Tags: curtal, sonnet, nonce, form, tender, weight, sighs, heart, doubt, presence, gravity, orbit
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michael-r-burch
62 / M / Nashville, Tennessee
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Mar 30, 2020
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#curtal#sonnet#nonce#form#tender#weight#sighs#heart#doubt#presence
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