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Max
Poems
Mar 2019
Do not exceed..
The bottle has a lot of words
Like a flock of flightless birds.
It tells me not to exceed two
Just like my friends telling me not to exceed heartbreaks from you.
You tell me to take eleven
So that I wont go to heaven.
But I ended up taking thirteen
So that my vision turned green.
I started getting dizzy
And the world was going fizzy.
Which way was up, and which way was down?
My vision started turning brown.
My stomach started to ache
My mind started to break.
The tears kept falling
And i kept bawling.
The ground was so cold as I laid there waiting for oblivion
I felt like I was done.
I couldn't handle the colours no more
so I shut the door.
I laid on my bed looking at the clock
And glanced at the door lock.
I shut my eyes calmly
As my arms rested near me.
The clock struck one
And I was done.
Theres probably a lot of spelling errors
Woops
#woops
#dark
#suicide
#overdose
#triggering
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Max
20/Non-binary/KS
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