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Smoking Rain

He was pale as death,

running down like an over-wound clock

Beneath his eyes,

dark signs of sleeplessness tumbled short of his dreams.

The pale gold odor of his lips,

Parted with a series of beginnings.

He was confounded with wonder at her presence

That voice held him most

Swathed in rose and lavender silk

The darker, well-kept expanse of his suppressed eagerness blazed with light.

His eyes,

a deep tropical burn,

on fire like the World’s Fair

remotely possessed by intense life

like a trembling match

stained with creative passion

 

He searched for her night and day

The exhilarating ripple of her voice was a wild tonic rain

a deathless song

a faint flow of thunder

he followed the sound of it into the thick folds of the sky.

her well-loved eyes,

smeared with tears,

glistening drops smashed into pieces on the floor

Standing in a puddle of mid-summer flowers

Bright ecstatic smile on the edge of pouring rain

Its fluctuating, feverish warmth,

full of aching grieving beauty,

told of unexpected joy

Are you in love with me?

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Written by
apomegranatesmemoir13
20 / Two-Spirit
Published
Nov 28, 2018
Lines·Words
30·179
Notes

Found poem from The Great Gatsby

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#love#romance#gatsby#daisy#foundpoem#book
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