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Loyalty in Name Not Deed

by 1sadiewrites

Blood-soaked, too close, unspoke words. Your mom's eyes, but never her ear. Dad's words of wisdom, but you know next to nothing about his life experiences. Granddaddy calls your brother by gay slurs Still, when you talk to him, you're expected to say, “Yes, sir.” Share a room, share your clothes with your sister. She won't share why she stays with a boyfriend who hits her. There's been too much agression already, so you don't want to pry, you don't want to push. Family functional means carrying on, harmony at the expense of heart.
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1sadiewrites
30 / F / United States
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Written by
1sadiewrites
30 / F / United States
Published
Jun 28, 2018
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15·94
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So I feel like the end might be a little too abrupt. I can't decide if I completely like it, so if you have any thoughts you want to share on this, please do. ☺

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#freeform#family#observations#sad#cynical
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