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Apr 2018
the champagne starts to taste like ash
as you fast crash, burn and start to rain like dust and soot.
quick, backtrack and rehash where it went wrong.
the vents, did they pop? did they bleed? did they clot?
plunder your gut, misplace your trust and start to let it rot.
If you don't get this poem that's okay, it's describing a once in a lifetime feeling. it's also just plain and simply not too great.
david mitchell
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