My eyes sparkle Through the darkness Like the stars in the sky A shooting star goes passing by Sending sparks, lighting up the sky Like rain falling, tears fill up my eyes Pretending like nothings wrong But a storm is brewing inside Through the darkness Thereβs always light Each passing storm Usually ends oh so bright Dancing in the storm Brings me happiness Even with the thunder and lighting Like my eyes, always has a sparkle of light
Kind of a different rhythm and take on a poem... what do you think?