Eyes - 1st Haiku by Muneer

Jan 2018

I'm a prisoner,
Drowning in their temptation,
Eyes of chocolate daze.

This is my first attempt at a Haiku. Is it correct? Would love to hear some feed back on this

#haiku #eyes #beauty

Written by

Muneer 27/M/Bahrain

(27/M/Bahrain)

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