I scrap and peel the patchwork of the earth Half written dreams dust the floor In the crook of her neck we drown Secrets eat away the floor The petal of her taste nips the winter pain Bird travelers taste the treetops Torn like a page from the language of your touch I'd split my bones to place you indside The day seemed so young as the floors begin to moan A hummingbird sobbing in the deepness of time As the night dreams
Any suggestions for a better name for this poem.Stuck in a rut.