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Touched with fire

by @daniela-jolin-linares

"As the sun and moon aligned in the sky, they illuminated each other's shine. And the closer to each other they moved, the brighter they shined, and the higher the fire inside of us grew. As we raced through the days on that fling, each footprint we laid blazed away that piece of the earth's entire lifetime of beauty in the brief second it touched our feet, leaving nothing but ashes beneath us. Until we had no ground left to stand on and nowhere left to flee. And now that we've turned away from our fire to face the days that remained unburned by the flames, and learn to gaze at them through sane eyes one day at a time. We can look back at our book with clear sight and give it the ending that we never got the chance to write. And while I know it's too late to pick up the ripped-up pages, I will admit, I still think of our little prince. And sometimes I go outside and look up at the sky and think about what planet he might've gone back to after he died. Then I imagine the three of us living up there as a family in another lifetime. But for now, you have your own life, and I have mine. And we have to live them the way we would have if we could go back to the day we conceived our child and were able to see what our manic eyes were blind to at the time. When the sun and moon finally came as close as they could be and the fire inside us rose to its highest peak, it leaped past the fading ashes of our flesh to burn our love into eternity, through our baby. That eternal flame that could blaze brighter than our manic one ever could on its brightest mania days, but that would also sustain. "
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Published
Oct 2, 2017
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Notes

Eclipse.

This is a piece of a great masterpiece. NOT MINE.

I find so much inspiration in this whole work. This is pure and intense in so many ways, it sets my heart on a fire of burning deep feelings, getting every neuron inside of me inspired.

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