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Jay earnest
Poems
Jun 2017
substance
I'm sorry
I don't care
if it;s prejudiced
or presumptive,
if you're younger than 18,
and haven't worked
or produced sweat under your pit
whilst
splashing grease on your arm
and handing a bag
to an old lady,
and driving a broken down car
which you have to jump every morning,
and wearing old black rags
that don't fit the *** well,
I don't care what you have to say.
all your work will be 'love'
and or issues with 'society'
and how it's done you wrong.
you need to die a little
before you can expect to write
something of substance.
so start now
Written by
Jay earnest
30/M/Socal
(30/M/Socal)
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