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Everything, Oh Everything

by elise-t

Her heart beat at each crossroad and her breathing demanded her not to slow so she dosed herself with the signs and senses and let the blood flow to deep crevices Decisions, not an answer she could steal From Everything, her gift was not to feel But empty, oh empty brought pain It was narcotic, keeping so many sane Everything, Compelling Everything; thought you had a way for me Right under your nose, I fill my senses to the brink; making me feel just so beautifully Everything, Oh Everything, how could you possibly see? I love the way you keep on laughing at us for breathing our own fatality
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Apr 24, 2017
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