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The Commoners Song

In time you’ll recover and absolve

push those scorned impressions aside

hammer down the jaded edges

and sing

that delightful commoners song

the one you sang so well

in what seems a lifetime ago

 

You really had it you know

that fiery disposition and nimble cunning

those butter chords and derelict style

we could see it -- we could all see it

it was all it took to turn the evening tide

(and rile that buck fever)

heads bashing

tongues lambasting

middle fingers high

and raising Cain on those may fly statesmen

 

There were no rules

when it came to your survival

no textbook rally or common bond

no structured songbird or bravado stage

you either made it, or laid it

“life by the ***** Mr. Poppy would say

a kaleidoscope of dreams

with rich colored imagery

hardened artisan seams

in a carefully woven motif

 

But something got lost in the needle point

something sinister and distorted took hold

the quirks and street genius

that were your lifeline

gave way to grunts

and squeals

and chilling night crawlers

the colors faded quickly

to a cold confining grey

 

There was no grace in the new world

no retribution or switch back

no salvation or accorded finale

only edged platforms of blackened steel

that kept you cased

in a silent vanquished cell

shivering cold with fear

night without day

all in the shadow of death

 

But time heals all

and the polish sneakers

and open sores are long gone

(though the roman nose and shallow cleft remain)

indeed the falconer beat the widow maker

this go around

and I’m hopeful it won’t happen again

and if it does you’ll see me

standing hand on heart

with that old verse in hand:

 

he ain’t tainted

or silly,

and most certainly

not forgotten…

he ain’t loony

or fixed,

or a product of his self-doing…

he’s just a straight shootin’ guy,

who had the most of it

figured out

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ck-baker
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Jan 29, 2017
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