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Jan 2016
you comb your fingers
ploughing warmly through my hair
my body shudders
Yes I know - far from the traditional format but I like the compact form. I guess purists would say drop the term haiku - I say go read Basho in kan'ji bro! Haha just havin fun : )
Timothy Ward
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Timothy Ward  22/M/California
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