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Timothy Ward
Poems
Jan 2016
Haiku (Lune 5-3-5)
a great whale breaches
"man-watching"
the pacific stirs
This is a Lune devised by poet Robert Kelly. You are restricted to 13 syllables 5/3/5 in his attempt to tighten the Haiku format in English
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Timothy Ward
22/M/California
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