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Sep 2015
I.
Doves fly out above Fishponds
trying to bring peace to my heart

I.I
Above trying to fly out. Peace:
bring doves to my Fishponds heart

I.I.I
Peace doves fly out above, trying
to bring Fishponds to my heart

I.V

My heart above trying
to bring peace to Fishponds. Doves fly out.
A new kind of poetry form I ( think) I've invented when you use the same words over & again to form new lines & meaning.
I've no idea what to call it yet ( & not even sure if it's been done before, if so, please correct me) though so I'll keep you posted on that & suggestions welcome. I think it's sorta close to the Dadaist cut-up technique but nevertheless different to it.
Fishponds is a part of town where I live.
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