Outside, cold icy fingered wind, bites Whistles down stone chimneys, inside Amber flames flickering in the hearth, Shadows dance across the wall, Candle sputtering in the draught Casting an eerie glow cross the page The book being read, strange tales Outside the wind surges, lashing Rain against the leaden panes Warm and cosseted against the storm The page is turned, the story continued A single scratch at the window, And a rattling of the latch Heavy door squeaks open, On old heavy hinges The book drops β¦ Fingers slowly slide round Gripping the doors edge Skin grey, taught against bones The Readerβs eyes riveted On this unfolding chapter
Second draft of poem, to show how it develops. At this point I want to build the atmosphere through the weather at the beginning, and am also thinking about an ending, with , or without a twist.