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Jul 2015
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all lies and jests
But a man hears what he wants to hear

And disregards the rest

( Simon and Garfunkle / the Boxer )

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HE SAID HE LOVED ME !
HE SAID HE LOVED ME !

BUT HE DIDN'T !

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Oh ! Poor baby !
Such a sensitive write !
I can really relate to what you are feeling !

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HE SAID HE LOVED ME !
HE SAID HE LOVED ME !

BUT HE DIDN ! T

THE TRAITOR !

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Oh poor baby !
Men are like that !

Hang in there !

We are here for you !

Express yourself in words !

Your poetry is so sensitive

Keep writing !

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HE SAID HE LOVED ME
BUT HE DIDN 'T

( THE TRAITOR )

SO I CUT MYSELF WITH A RAZOR BLADE !

//

Congratulations !

That took courage and certainly put him
In his place !

Such noble scars !

A lifetime reminder of your

Courage

And the purity of your love

Expressed so poetically

And an inspiration for us all !!

//

HE SAID HE LOVED ME BUT HE DIDN'T

AND HE LEFT ME AND BETRAYED ME

SO I CUT MYSELF WITH A RAZOR BLADE

AND THEN TRIED TO **** MYSELF !

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You did !

How utterly poetic !

This is the most beautiful poem I have

Ever read !

I can relate to it entirely !

Keep up the good work

You are practically here now

With the rest of us !
( the BEST of us )

/:./

(?)

/:;/

(?)

/../

Hey

Haven't heard from you in awhile

How's it going !

//

Are you still there !

//

Hey
Are you still there ?
Written by
jeffrey robin
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   ejrmaguire, Poetic T and Erenn
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