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Brent Kincaid
Poems
Apr 2015
AWESOME
AWESOME
Excited about our vacation
We knew it was going to cost some
But since it was to Hawaii
We were sure it would be awesome.
We went whale watching
And guess what, we saw some.
They were leaping up high
Out of the water, it was awesome.
The captain shared his tobacco.
I had always wanted to chaw some.
I hated the taste, but he didn’t.
He really believed it was awesome.
We went through a garden
And looked at each blossom.
They were beautiful to see
The colors were pretty awesome.
And the hospitality staff too,
We didn’t even have to boss ‘em.
They anticipated our wishes
They were all totally awesome.
We ended the trip with snacks
And we couldn’t wait to go nosh ‘em.
They call snacks pupus in Hawaii.
What can I say? Sort of awesome!
Brent Kincaid
4/6/2015
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Brent Kincaid
Kapaa, Kaua'i, Hawaii
(Kapaa, Kaua'i, Hawaii)
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