'I don't know if you've ever heard Of the Great Charge.' Said one to me. I smiled And thought of those Shouted onwards by He on the Hill.
I had heard of it, I had heard they bled When they were shot while they were led. Who'd have thought? I frowned. And thought of those Shouted onwards by He on the Hill.
'Funny.' he said 'His Hill was so much higher Than all the cannon fire, but They say he still cried out With each muzzle's shout.' I nodded. And thought of those Let down by He on the Hill.
'Yes.' I said 'In fact they all cried Together when they died And realised what they're worth, that His Hill was only earth And they were only bones.' I walked away And thought of those Made to realise they were nothing By me on the hill.
A response, (although I'm afraid the poem went a bit wild, sorry!) to Ron Savory's poem, Hands Up!