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 Apr 2016
Dornish Bastard
hellopoetry.com/collection/20186/years/
A few hours pass with the boy still there,
Drawn to his body like he's tethered.
A few more and he's floating in moonlight
But no sleep will bring him comfort.
A small fish catches his restless eye,
A quick shadow against the current's silver.
Closer, the boy sees sharp teeth bared.
The fish eyes his corpse like its dinner.
A desperate *NO
escapes his throat
As he scrambles to stop the scavenger.
He cannot, and he cries out in frustration,
His sobs joining the sounds of nature.
Ethereal tears fall on ethereal hands
As despair morphs into very real *anger.
Here's another one. I am making this up as I go along. Please leave feedback! :) As for me, I liked the first one more… Also, I am running out of /ər/ words help
 Apr 2016
Dornish Bastard
hellopoetry.com/collection/20186/years/
A boy looks down and sees his body
Being tossed away in a shallow river
He cannot move and he's in shock.
What happened? He can't remember.
There's a bright flash―unexpected, sudden
―and heavy hands on his shoulders.
Was there pain? There was some,
And there was the taste of anger.
He doesn't know what to think, confused
When his body settles in shallow water.
He gets up with ease. *With ease?

What comes next fills him with terror.
His body is still, bloated and pale
But he's standing. Over his body he towers.
I don't know if I can keep this up. Whatcha think about it though?
P.S. If it seems rushed, that's because it is. I wrote this in like 20 minutes at 2AM. Thanks for reading this ****.

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