SMK - Hello Poetry

SMK

SMK

Wrote my first ever poem (black and Blue) in November, and then picked it back up in 2014 and just playing about with it when I have something going. Any advice would be much appreciated or thoughts on how to improve

lost life will face love moment time happiness death ease grace truth strong feel live heart strength left moments fifty held black smile day desire easily beseech night brave blue lovers turn misery lies unknown create stars flat option fire true glory bed making heard things dream forced desolate forget stays cheap felt distanced earth hate overtook appears grouped waiting reasons spread outwards wet enlightenment worth norm disrepair rescue stay watching rules rhyme lucky choice overpowering perfection birth fall screaming prominent heaven covering calling reminding sang quick friendship graces enjoy lie piglet people met unscrew searching lion unfit bare sight pass candle emptiness perfections lead sun pew melt moon wrong evoked lucifer safety finger told noise explosion makeup gloom story drives blame small utter struggle lasts meet dress imperfections silent wept hours great feeling lifestyle psalms desired inspired quiet times creates despair stoked stone changes burning demands dull reaches walk