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SMK
SMK
Wrote my first ever poem (black and Blue) in November, and then picked it back up in 2014 and just playing about with it when I have something going. Any advice would be much appreciated or thoughts on how to improve
The moon never shines, nor the stars gleam The night is dull, not even a dream My boat is oar-less, stranded at sea No rescue party, but I’m happy it’s just me This pit of destruction, I’ve dug for myself, It is my new home, it is my whole wealth The happiness found, in gloom and whisper A million things tried, but only, to miss her The mountains are calling, the air is fresh Why is she all, that’s ever on my breath The time has come to end it; three paths are ahead Life, or death, or misery, my heart will never feel fed ………………….. ………………….. I choose death and make it quick Now it’s over, she was my sick.
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 10:42 AM UTC
Evil creates illness
I know I have distanced myself from her She made me feel like Lucifer, I lost my way, I lost my head, All because I wasn’t the one in her bed The stars will tell her the story of how I felt, The burning inside, that’s making me melt, I dream of her, from the safety of my bed My heart screaming the words, it demands to be said. The hours won’t stay, and she’s already gone, The emptiness reminds me that I have done her wrong My vice is grouped, one of a seven A seven which can too easily create a false heaven The damage done, will not be evoked, For while I’m with her, the fire is always stoked We are so different, we are so the same, As the beast at the circus, don’t let yourself be tame Brain overtook heart and to her face I would lie, The truth easily told, when we’d say bye I want her to live in happiness, not a forced misery, I want to be a part of that, each and every day I want your graces, I believe a just cause I need it to be, the same as it was
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 10:37 AM UTC
My overpowering jealousy
We are all left in this world alone Collecting names of lovers lost And through this loss we long to live again, But again is not the option As making one’s self small is not the option, Only in strength and enlightenment do we create what is desired, There is no future in shrinking Or searching for the past There is no greatness found in stone already tread What we desire is before us And the decaying past will only push us towards what we truly desire. Be brave in times of disrepair Lead yourself before following the folly rules of those unfit All is well when truth lies within When strength is unwavering And principles can be held true Tell them I sang the ancient psalms at dusk when strong men wept
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 10:33 AM UTC
Lovers Lost
This hand, this face, this grace, Beseech me Your glory has been found Your strength put on show When you are gone the world lies flat The eagles walk The lion stays silent in its den The world is not at it's norm When you utter no words The quiet is deafening These moments expand through the unknown Finger on the trigger, waiting for explosion When you are near and in comfort All is still and song appears A noise heard only in love Heard only by the lucky When that smile sits upon your face The glow drives outwards Happiness is spread around Covering the area of devastation A fifty fifty world now left flat No grace, no face, no smile For you are gone And the world is plain again
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 10:32 AM UTC
You beseech me
Black and blue the waves did role Over the sun and under the soul The world we live, atrocities have been seen Death, ****** hate. Prominent they have always been But love is the truth Love conquers all Believe in what you must Be strong when you take the fall The brave get the glory It reaches but a few While the others are left watching, Sulking from their pew I write to you on this day Another candle, another flame Reminding me of a fire For which you should take the blame Hardly for the first time I looked upon your face You fill me up from toe to tip All because of your ease, your grace Your dress is cheap No makeup needed But a sight to behold You had me defeated This elegance unknown by others An ease in life held only by one or two You are near perfection For this I say thank you These are not the reasons for my enchantment For I knew of you I swear I love your imperfections And your perfections I can bare In that moment it changes, Life went from one to the next Ease would turn to struggle And life became more complex Every moment I enjoy your fever Your sonsie little face Your spirit kept me up at night The little things which make you great Thank you for these moments Thank you for your time For if nothing else, in this moment You have inspired this simple rhyme The true friends you meet They give you something rare Those who can make you strong When the world is in despair For the failures of life Must be noted from birth For running will only Make you pass over earth And I know we were lost Our shelf began to unscrew But friendship lasts forever As that of piglet and pooh Finding the moment That you will never forget Takes no time to look for If you don’t look for it Some people feel the rain Others just get wet A feeling or a lifestyle A choice to be met What is life without it Is it worth the final cost Turn them onto me with mercy For i am desolate an lost
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 10:25 AM UTC
Black and Blue
Black and blue the waves did role Over the sun and under the soul The world we live, atrocities have been seen Death, ****** hate. Prominent they have always been But love is the truth Love conquers all Believe in what you must Be strong when you take the fall The brave get the glory It reaches but a few While the others are left watching, Sulking from their pew I write to you on this day Another candle, another flame Reminding me of a fire For which you should take the blame Hardly for the first time I looked upon your face You fill me up from toe to tip All because of your ease, your grace Your dress is cheap No makeup needed But a sight to behold You had me defeated This elegance unknown by others An ease in life held only by one or two You are near perfection For this I say thank you These are not the reasons for my enchantment For I knew of you I swear I love your imperfections And your perfections I can bare In that moment it changes, Life went from one to the next Ease would turn to struggle And life became more complex Every moment I enjoy your fever Your sonsie little face Your spirit kept me up at night The little things which make you great Thank you for these moments Thank you for your time For if nothing else, in this moment You have inspired this simple rhyme The true friends you meet They give you something rare Those who can make you strong When the world is in despair For the failures of life Must be noted from birth For running will only Make you pass over earth And I know we were lost Our shelf began to unscrew But friendship lasts forever As that of piglet and pooh Finding the moment That you will never forget Takes no time to look for If you don’t look for it Some people feel the rain Others just get wet A feeling or a lifestyle A choice to be met What is life without it Is it worth the final cost Turn them onto me with mercy For i am desolate an lost
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