NavKaur5450755 - Hello Poetry

NavKaur5450755

19/F/Surrey BC Canada Hi there! I'm Nav and it's my first time doing my own poetry. So basically I am just a beginner and I hope I could receive some tips and advises from you guys.

will breathe life silence day eyes friend scared time dead promise judge matter hurt finally love thing bed funny deep felt forgive blade fight gun holding mirror peace hear monsters best hope trust things storm ready pain leave dad family die people pills rope dear bottle knife tok tik choose mom depression change late stronger chance pointing man head pull shot trigger smile water waves chirping rain fishes swimming clean bird ocean lose dose cutting keeping form bending child rules everyday increase abd moving lost medicine misunderstood freedom hangs putting unleash laws emotionally separated captain forging peterpan netherland gurl revenge hook useless risk lack town lying parents promises loved arguments broken secrets ruin making kill worse help full ruined goodbye coming dark basement mistake wih stood quiet bright hard adoration unconditionally mouth ego waited big open accepts shines diamond left empty loves flawless exact feeling wrists tired overdose reasons live