please remember that some of my poetry is written in the vein of ezra pound’s personae stylicism, i.e. i don’t know who’s actually talking, it’s not necessarily me making conversation / oratory monologue, due to the fact that it does not take place in an epic place like the senate... but rather inside my own head.*
that’s what philosophy forgot... it said poetry was madness
and later god related; philosophy wanted an almost
mathematical expression of language, it became stiff regurgitation,
it refused to accept the work of grammaticians,
it refused to mention technical terms of grammar like noun / adjective,
instead it began and ended with really obstructive words
that could mean anything - e.g. anything, thing, etc.
it didn’t spot a chirality of its aloofness,
just because it (pronoun) and he (pronoun) are identitcal
in the grammatical categorisation, when expressed
the orka swam north west rather than north east, to avoid
the faroe islands’ slaughter, as depicted by marie mason.
p.s. what about an aristotelian cocktail?
you know that famous one... a man who lives alone
is either an animal or a god.
mash up!
take some human elements and take some ******* elements,
mix ‘em up... get what you want to be human...
god parts are generally regarded as internalised sounds
to create thought... also the complexity and variation of sounds made,
also being against the (0,0) coordinate of a meow...
meow on the roof, meow on a tree, meow on a car bonet,
meow on the sofa... you know what it is and where it’s coming from...
the animal parts? einstein’s warddrobe, i.e. wearing pretty much
the same thing everyday, like a fox with its fur,
the long periods of silence, angry evaluations of scenariors,
the tedium of eating - fast long enough and you get angry enough
and that anger you turn into the eating made necessary.
oh right, i forgot, i’m teaching this egyptian girl some lingo:
Rayhanakm 14 hours ago
I love ur edit thank you so much ... ???? i will share this thank u again
Rayhanakm 11 hours ago
but i wanne tell you that my English language not very good cause i talk arabic more and iam new in writting poetries..so if i could ask you to help me in this thing i feel that you are so good here ????????
Matthew Conrad 6 seconds ago
don't feel any shame about what you haven't perfected given the time constraints of your endeavour, i didn't speak to perfection at some point, i too acquired english, it's not my first language - although i have to stress that i'm not too conscious of the transition between being illiterate with it to being literate, since it happened a long time ago. but poetry is a good beginning, after all poetry is a method of abstracting language, which leaves many black holes that will be happily filled to provide a standardised form of it, the non-poetic the bureucratic version - the version that allocates you to a mechanised function - one thing to note about my transition is that i was born into speaking polish, but i hardly remember the alphabet of months, i can remember the alphabet january through to december perfectly in english, but in polish i'm like: stycze? luty... grudzie?... i get muddled... as i get muddle the actual english alphabet... because i first learnt it as a sing-along that's sung with a crescendo when the letters m n l o p come up... q r s t u v... etc. make one aspect of your arabic usage weak... then you'll see what weakness you have in how you use english... then, with hope implied, you will do a perfect juggling act of bilingualism. first of all... concentrate on the little words in terms of how they are arranged... for example... your first sentence is missing a preposition (a word that presupposes an engagement with a larger word, larger words are usually nouns - the others are smaller enough running could imply a 100m sprint or a marthon - but there’s still a consistency of them being similar, and they are rarely modified... for example onomatopoeia can only be modified into an adjective: onomatopoeiac - having the quality of an onomatopoeia)... the word missing is (cut in point) tell you that my english language usage is not very good (cut off point) - anyone can memorise what's called what... but there is a complexity in the arrangement in how that thing is modified or acted upon in the land of phoneticism - i'll watch your progress as you write. ok?
