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"diegetic" poems
A black and white film About an old man and his dog. There is no dialogue. Just ambient sounds - First, of the alarm clock’s monotonous song. Followed by an abrupt cutting silence as his hand slams down on the snooze button Then, the sound of a coffeemaker spitting and burbling. The coffee, pouring into a chipped mug. Sugar, then milk, the clink of the spoon against the ceramic as he stirs the long first sip As the man looks curiously at something on the fridge, just out of frame. A bag of dogfood opening. hard kibble ringing against the metal dish. The dog grumbling - impatiently waiting. Tupperware  opening The hum of a microwave, and the beep. Last night’s stew poured into a bowl the rest, over the kibble. The closed caption reads: [Enthusiastic, sloppy eating noises] The sound of water running as the bowls are scrubbed clean. The door closing as the two leave for their morning walk. The old man and the dog are now sitting on a park bench. The grass, still wet from the morning dew. There is a beautiful sunrise over the nearby lake. The camera pulls away, as music overtakes the diegetic sounds of nearby parkgoers, birds and runners, and teens playing hooky. The camera cuts back to for a beat to the kitchen in the empty house. The camera zooms in on a weathered and well loved piece of paper held up by a rainbow magnet on the refrigerator door. Fade to a black screen, with white letters: Fin.
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Sep 12, 2022
Sep 12, 2022 at 9:43 PM UTC
Picture This
The back porch is quiet as they stare out into the well groomed yard, the beautiful sunrise has been captured reluctantly by the clouds as a light rain and thunder in the distance breaks the beautiful silence. She holds her " #1 Mom" mug with two hands sipping her coffee quietly, silently, non-violently, as if to avoid startling the birds of summer. Birds, they bathe without disruption, because this morning, Predators have turned Peaceful. As the breeze sways the hand crafted wind chimes, The diegetic music seems objective as he turns from page to page The Sunday paper filled with stories of violence and hate crimes committed with hands that aren't big enough to carry the burden which is created by taking the life of another, including most recently, both sisters and brothers, sons killed by their mothers, they're monsters. but Here, on a Sunday morning, printed words are as close as violence will ever get to their home. For every man who chooses to be A Predator, to take the life of another, they know of at least Two Lovers, a #1 Father and a #1 Mother. Sitting on the back porch as the rain slows to a halt, Tomorrow is Monday, taken with a grain of salt.
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Oct 17, 2011
Oct 17, 2011 at 2:06 AM UTC
Peaceful on the Back Porch
You for a moment Become the great love of my life Then I die again _______________________________ I in the background Barely passing into frame Did you see me there _______________________________ You brought me hot tea Giving each other soft smiles I want to kiss you ______________________________ My body shaking My mind screaming I LOVE YOU My lips shut eternal ______________________________ I fall for strangers Blind to the ones at my door My heart in the wind
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Dec 12, 2017
Dec 12, 2017 at 3:26 PM UTC
Non-Diegetic Haikus