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when you left
you took the color with you,
and now the world
is like an old television set,
with muffled sound
that grates the ears,
and a picture
that cuts in and out,
filled with static,
in brilliant black and white,
that's made more of shades of gray.
did your world get more vibrant,
when you de-saturated mine?
or did the color
disappear entirely;
slipping out of your fingers
to be consumed
by the void
where my heart
once lived

Contributed by @the.poetic.gatsby
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"I miss the color in my life"

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Atop a high knoll, a Gothic arbor. The town
below seethes in blustery breezes that whirl
around the few trees, bare and brown:
A tempest’s iron furies unfurl.

Two lovers stand on the hill’s stony ground
beneath the arbor’s brick sky
as they look out over the city around
them: marching clouds descend from on high.

The winds whip higher and stir dead leaves
while they hold one another’s warm hands.
Though the bleak scene may lead them to grieve,
no: In togetherness, they make their stand.

They fight, fight for their love: It ignites
their glowing embers of heartlight.
Inspired by this photo I took of the Gerichtslaube (Court Arbor), a remnant of a 13th century court building from Berlin that was moved to Potsdam in the 19th century: https://bsky.app/profile/jackgroundhog.bsky.social/post/3lgskwioca22l
I got another letter

From you again

But I find that

I can’t bring myself

To read it



How do I respond

What if I’m not good enough for you

So I shove it in the drawer

Where all the others rest

And pretend that nothing happened
Part of a writing challenge
And yes

I admit

I want what you have

And I can't escape this feeling

  

Because I love you

And the parts you hide

Because I know what you did last night

Just let me hold you in my arms

  

I saw you laughing

With the sand in your hair

I should have been smiling

But you were looking at her

  

So I'll let the sea drown me

And swallow me whole

Because I don't think I can bring myself

To see you again tomorrow
Part of a writing challenge
When the rain

Hits my face

I wonder where you are

  

I saw my reflection

On the side of the road

I don't recognize what I've become

  

So I leave my song

Up to you

In hopes that your dreams come true
part of a writing challenge
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