birds ever whirling in a sky that keeps churning: the sands of time fly
This may be a bit closer to real Haiku. At least it’s drawing from nature. One thing I know is that I’ve got a lot to learn about this seemingly simple form of poetry.
Sunlight considers It’s memories while dancing Light everlasting
4/23/2017
Struggled with this one over the course of a day--just coming back to it every so often. The last line came like a light switching on and there it was.