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Underwater window (A collaborative with Dajena)

Light , curvy rays, bending, while traveling from air to water world. My eyelashes - window wipers. Crystalline lenses, sending lovely but blurry pictures wait.. let me focus my retina, underwater dream, or is it really you? Dark, straight silhouettes, frightening, falling from the busy water above My chest - darkened vents reaching far, wanting lovely, but faint pictures I can’t wait any longer, for the dark room to lighten I need you to show me I take a deep breath And dive in again. Debrees of scars And piercing pain. Your soul still mauve and blue. I press my lips respiring pure love into you. Breathe your best into the spine of my life Expelling fortitude And forgiveness Hidden in this deep blue Revitalized for the first time This moment opened its eyes to see the beauty of what beneath the surface lies
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Written by
jwolfeb
35 / M
Published
Nov 15, 2014
Lines·Words
39·144
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An amazing collaborative  with Dajena M. Such a great writer and a true pleasure to write a piece together.

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#dreams#underwater
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