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What Are You Doing TO Me?

I'm trying to read poetry... a new love for me. My critic's heart is not so harsh since you came to me.              You've freed me.                                               But.................. I'm distracted. I'm stuck... thinking... your hand in my  mouth... the other on my wrist... the blankets falling down... There's teeth inside that kiss.                          Even now my breath is ragged... my heart is quick to send oxygen to my                        (you know what) and I.... know I love you for           far more than this...               but.............. OH my GAWD... Did he just? Yes he did. And a smile wouldn't cover how I felt with you last night. Sounds like some smut, right? Like I'm lost inside some teenaged loins and thinking only of my groin but you know me more than I know me. I spent six years waiting  for this...                                 like it could be cultivated.. making love instead of making love. Like the goal was feeling satisfied instead of feeling loved.
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Written by
aubrey
American
Published
Aug 16, 2014
Lines·Words
50·156
Tags
#love#desire#satisfaction#lovemaking
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